This piece has just become more and more of a mess. It is a play after a drawing piece. Let me know if you can figure out what is going on. I will leave it alone for awhile.
i'm not sure what's going on symbolicly but from an abstract visual standpoint it's colorful, i like the patterns-is there a footprint in there? i like the partial number, it contrasts with the other shapes.i think you need to just refine it: tie some things together, it's fairly flat right now-maybe create some depth, have things come forward and some receed(like the footprint?)do the old "turn it upside down" trick and see what you find
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Have to look at this one a couple of times before I figure it out! :)
i'm not sure what's going on symbolicly but from an abstract visual standpoint it's colorful, i like the patterns-is there a footprint in there? i like the partial number, it contrasts with the other shapes.i think you need to just refine it: tie some things together, it's fairly flat right now-maybe create some depth, have things come forward and some receed(like the footprint?)do the old "turn it upside down" trick and see what you find
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