Monday, July 9, 2012

Rebirth

This was a funky canvas created during a process free for all at Maine College of Art. I took a photo of my students for a piece about marks on the soul. I started layering and the bird appeared.(There's a surprise). I then added the females and have my center girl the same colors as the bird. I am unhappy with the middle left side and upper right. Any suggestions?

2 comments:

miss p said...

Think the upper right looks great the way it is...and I like the appearance of water (not sure if you meant this, I find water in everything) under the students on the right..kinda like waves..what if you added some of that look to the middle left? And where is the girl's head/face? Does she need to be "seen"? You know me and no faces...:)

denise bach said...

i love that there are hidden images in this piece ( you know i love a search and find) maybe more of that kind of subtle thing in those areas you're not happy with? also- love that you have this bird thing going on in your work!